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Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Call it hope in whispers. Way down at the bottom of the box of sins and sorrows, I believe it’s listening for its name.

Wonderful poem, Ray!

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Lovely comment. Whispers getting louder. Jackie Wilson said

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Peachy!

20th Century Fox's avatar

We call it idiocracy. We call it c’est la vie. We call it Lebensmüde. We dust ourselves off and keep marching. Hope or no hope.

Moon-Kite Maker's avatar

From Pema Chödrön, one of the first western women to be fully ordained in the Tibetan Buddhist tradition: “In Tibetan there's an interesting word: ye tang che. The ye part means ‘totally, completely,’ and the rest of it means ‘exhausted.’ Altogether, ye tang che means totally tired out. We might say ‘totally fed up.’ It describes an experience of complete hopelessness, of completely giving up hope. This is an important point. This is the beginning of the beginning. Without giving up hope—that there's somewhere better to be, that there's someone better to be—we will never relax with where we are or who we are.”

20th Century Fox's avatar

Love this. In German, we have a similar term. But we don’t see it as a beginning. We jump off a tall bridge.

lchristopher's avatar

holy.

Ray Sweatman's avatar

gracias, lc!

David Rizzo's avatar

Good questions, Ray. Good questions.

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Thanks David!

David Rizzo's avatar

👍

The Unusual Woman's avatar

I love this one

Bran Iberi's avatar

Some good Socratic Method.

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Thanks bran!

Petra's avatar

I'll bring the popcorn. ;)

Elizabeth's avatar

Do we? Sorry, I stopped reading halfway through 😉

I would call it a prophetic poetic prognostication by my friend, Ray.

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Thanks Elizabeth;)

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