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Moon-Kite Maker's avatar

Mama hears you, I think. And I will be very displeased if this poem doesn’t end up in some anthology someday. It’s lovely to read you in a gentler and more vulnerable tone, though I find all the wit and breeziness remain intact. Truly, Ray, this poem is a delight.

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That's very generous. Much appreciated mkm!

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

This is so touching, Ray!Wonderfully realized time capsule, with a beautiful thread of love. I’m so glad you’re singing!

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Thanks Elizabeth m!

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Thanks Elizabeth L, Christopher, UW, b, James!

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Thanks been!

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Thanks nora!