Such a condensed, precise, eerie way to describe departure. One hand on the steering wheel, the other still holding her. A barrier missed - time, irrelevant. Beautiful Ray.
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Fantastic piece. He didn't observe the willow curve , the barrier.
thanks richard
Time has no dominion.
Another beauty, Ray!
thanks nora !!
Beautiful. Thank you for this.
thanks for the kind words, jj!
Lovely rhymes, great imagery.
thanks, Cael!
Such a condensed, precise, eerie way to describe departure. One hand on the steering wheel, the other still holding her. A barrier missed - time, irrelevant. Beautiful Ray.
Thanks for the kind words moty!
You're very welcome. This piece is something special - it holds a technique I'd love to master myself, one day.
thanks, moty! It's always fun to play with different forms/styles. Yours is cool!
Really liked that last line
Thanks m.p.!
I can never remember where I parked
Me either, Earl!
I really enjoyed reading that. Great stuff, Ray.
thanks, Gary!
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thanks bran!
thanks, paul!